Wednesday 18 September 2019

the machine starts - part 1


This is the first part of a longer short story, which should be read in order, starting here










Something about bright lights, a voice telling him… what? It was a strange kind of dream, but one he’d had before: elusive as ever, slipping away now. But a sweet dream, anyway. As day pushed out night from the room, waking overwrote sleep. He listened a moment. Bird song, a distant rumble of the freeway, a familiar but elusive clicking. Had the voice been telling him… something about the clicking? He swung his legs out of the bed, prising apart his eyelids. He shook his head, trying to clear away vapid thoughts. Light shafted across the room: another bright California day. Something about the light, a network of light. Wasn’t it?




Alfie stretched. Bett turned over, still deeply asleep. Lucky her. He scratched his ribs, a little sticky in yesterday’s underwear. Coffee first though. My brain hurts. The clicking grew as he loped down the corridor, past the kids’ rooms. Dan on his new Gizmo III. Had he been clicking away all night? Dad pushed his head in at the door. The kid barely looked up, resenting the break in concentration – he failed to make the level seven gateway in time. Kath likewise, when he looked in at her, was already up and communicating with her MultiFace buds. It seemed to be more complex than a video conference with his suppliers at WorldNet: four or five mini screens popping in and out as her friends chipped in, deconstructing a vid of some Korean boyband. Facebook on steroids. Kath was focusing too much to do more than grunt at Dad’s morning greeting.





“Still in bed, Alfie?”

“On my way, I’ll be there in twenty.”

“Still at home, matey.” More a resigned statement than a question.

“Greg – I hate it when you check out where I am.”

“It’s the modern world. Get used to it. But you never will, though you invented half of it, eh? MultiFace updates, twitter logs, ‘Where’s my i-phone?’”

“Wish I hadn’t sometimes.”

“Don’t say that – the big guy will kill you. So we’ll say forty-five.”

“Thirty.”

“You haven’t even showered yet.”

“Now how the heck did you…”

“Call it intuition. And sharing a flat in Cambridge. I haven’t installed surveillance in your place. Yet!”

“Thank god for that!”

“OK, we’ll put back the brainstorm until 8:30.”

“The brainstorm? I forgot all about…”

And then he had it. The blinding flash; the clicks; the voice: the Dream.


*          *          *          *          *

“Guys, guys: we’re failing. This quarter’s sales are down five per cent year on year. This carries on, we fail.”

“Ethan, this is WorldNet; the world’s biggest brand. You’ve got to be…”

“And it’s gonna stay that way, Alfred. And more.” Only Ethan called him Alfred, and even then only when he was mad – which was most of the time. “But we can’t rely on releasing minor tweaks of old products forever. The Gizmo is over five years old now. MultiFace – OK it needs time, but the take up’s been slower than we hoped. It’s only 80% planned.”

“The games division is steady.” Greg – always trying to pour oil on troubled waters.

“Steady?” Ethan – always ready to set fire to it.

“Well, I’m working on something.”

Greg looked at him across the table. One of those looks. You’re blurting stuff out again: don’t do this without discussing first.

“But I can’t really…”

“I need to know, Alfred.” But he could see a little suppressed excitement. Ethan knew, for all the exasperation from having to deal with Alfie, that ‘working on something’ was a sign the bills could be paid. “Give.”

Give, yes, give give give. Why did we have to go and sell ourselves to these fuckers?

“It’s too early to really put into words, Ethan. All in good time.” All in good time? He hated it when he came out with stuff like that – he sounded like his father. “I’m sure WorldNet can lurch on for another few months while…”

Ethan glared. “Alfred: you know how long it takes to develop a product. To market a product. To re-launch a product?”

Alfie glared back. “Then to fix all the bugs because it was so rushed…”

Greg jumped in: “If you’re referring to MultiFace, which…”

“I’m referring to every goddam thing that comes out of this company. Brits!” This was as low as it got in the Ethan Harmer book of world insults. “Basically, we haven’t had a new product for years now. Are you guys holding something back? Now give – what is this new idea?”

“Well: it could be revolutionary.”

Ethan pricked up. “Go on?”

“Well. I dreamed about it last night. A new kind of mouse.”



*          *          *          *          *
“Probably didn’t express it very well. Bathetic? Now. There’s a word I love!” he said it again, rolling it around his tongue.

“I’ve told you. Don’t just blurt stuff out. Especially to Ethan. These things need to be… finessed. ‘A new kind of mouse?’”

“What I meant was, ‘the mouse revolutionized the interface with the PC’. This is the next step: complete human-machine connectivity. He was kind of underwhelmed, wasn’t he?”

“That’s putting it mildly. He was thinking: a new bit of plastic they will sell at PC World for $25.”

“Why did we have to sell out to these fuckers. They have no imagination.”

“Stop saying that, Alfie. You know why.”

“Debt Mountain?”

“Debt Mountain. Are you happy with your mansion by the Bay, your shiny new Bentley, your little hideaway among the redwoods, and the company jet that gets you there?”

“OK, don’t rub it in. But – am I happy? Yes, I’m happy. But you know, sometimes I worry about what it’s doing to the kids. My kids. All kids. It’s all going so fast, Greg. Basically we sell stuff that makes them more and more remote. I looked in on Dan and Kath this morning and they were already wired in and… do they get any benefit from a nice house, good schools, whatever? They live in a virtual world already: they could be anywhere. I take them walking through Stout Grove and look up at the trees – the world’s oldest living things, the most massive – magnificent, the cathedral of nature. Light slanting through dimly to the forest floor, the gentle clicks of the woodpecker and hoots of the…”

He looked around the cafeteria; it was a miracle of the interior designer’s art – but did people care? Half of them were on their mobiles, their hand helds, or other devices. The rest were gobbling down their burgers so as to get back to their screens as fast as possible. People used to talk at lunchtime.

“Why are you saying this, Alfie?”

Yes, why? I’m beginning to sound like Bett did, before she too succumbed to the wonders of technology.

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